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Read the paragraph from Kevin’s personal narrative.

1. When I was in fifth grade, my family became interested in fostering kittens from the local animal shelter. 2. First, we had to fill out an application. 3. Next, we had to attend a workshop on caring for kittens properly. 4. A woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. 5. Finally, we were approved. 6. That was an exciting day!

What is missing in Kevin’s paragraph?

a time relationship between the events in sentences 3 and 4
a strong example that shows the family’s interest in helping animals
a connection between the family in sentence 1 and the woman in sentence 4
an opinion from the narrator that is related to the events in the story